Skrevet d. 13. januar 2007, 04:22 StarStar_emptyStar_empty Thumbs-up × 1 Thumbs-down × 0 Favorite-on × 1

Change

I'm looking in the mirror.
I see this girl.
Do I know her?
Does she know me?

She's looking so sad.
She's looking so hopeless.
Why is she sad?
When did the hope leave?

She has all these friends.
They make her feel happy.
So why is she lonely?
Why does she cry?

They tell her they love her.
They tell her they care.
Why can't she believe them?
Why can't she feel them care?

It hurts inside her.
It hurts in her heart.
Why don't they notice?
How her heart is torn apart?

She's not the same person.
She's changed inside.
When did she stop smiling?
When did she start to cry?
Avatar af Maribel d. 17. januar 2007, 11:37
omg.. (': det er bare så godt! du er god til atskrive! og og.. ej.. (':
Avatar af Fool d. 17. januar 2007, 22:32
Fantastisk smukt skrevet. Virkelig rørende.
Du har talent!! :D

- Fool