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Lonely Love

Avatar af Shane
Lonely Love
In the darkness of night and the light of day.
I wonder alone. A life is shifting away
I sit alone.
I walk alone
Life sings whit a different tone.
Just because I wont speak.
People look at me as if I was a freak.
But they do not understand.
They do not care.
They did not love you as I did.
They did not know me as you did.
Why can’t they see?
They pain that is deep inside of me.
I never asked for much.
I never complained
Only one lovely touch
Only one pain.
I loved you more then life it self.
I hope that you knew.
Death only takes what should be taken.
Why it had to be you I will never know.
I am now left alone back on the ground
The only thing I can say is a little sound.
I am now only me
I am now only lonely
Avatar af Tiana d. 13. september 2002, 12:20
Du skriver utrolig godt. Meget følelsesbetonet, meget livagtigt. Dog også ret trist! Men dine digte er gode, synes du skulle sende nogle flere ind. Hvis du altså har lyst! :o) Du må hygge.

Kærlig hilsen
Tiana