Skrevet d. 4. januar 2007, 16:37 StarStar_emptyStar_empty Thumbs-up × 5 Thumbs-down × 0 Favorite-on × 4

Behind the facade.

Avatar af Maribel
If you could see into her head,
What would you then see?
The eyes, are the mirror of the soul.
But what can you see,
when your eyes meet?
Can you see, what’s really going one
- Or are you just looking at her facade?

When you see, she is smiling,
she’s laughing and happy.
Can’t you then see
the sorrow in her eyes?
Can’t you see
how she’s fighting
to hide her hurting heart?
Can’t you feel it
- Or are you just looking at her facade?

Sometimes the pressure gets to much.
She’s alone. Lonely.
Tears running down at her cheeks.
However, when you come
the tears stop falling
and replaces off a beautiful smile.
When you ask if she’s okay
her answer is like always
“Yes I‘m fine!”
But she’s not.
Can’t you see, she needs you?
When you turn around, and walk away
- were you just looking at her facade?

Every time you guys get serious,
she wants to tell you.
Tell you her big secret, how she feels.
She trusts you, but she’s scared.
If you really knew, who she was,
would you then just disappear?
If she first opened up her heart.
If you saw her dirt and all her shame,
what would you do?
What would you think?
Would you stay with her?
Or?

Look around one more time.
Perhaps this time
you can see her.
Perhaps this time
you can catch her silent shout of help.
- Or are you still looking at the facade?
Think about it.
Avatar af 1991pige d. 10. januar 2007, 16:26
Sidder seriøst og får tårer i øjnene..
Det er vildt, men det føles som om det er mig der er pigen i dit digt..

Virkelig, virkelig, virkelig godt skrevet!
Avatar af minkæreskat d. 10. januar 2007, 19:51
Oh my.. det er bare det mest perfekte jeg har læst, det beskriver bare 100% hvad jeg føler.

Du er simpelthen fantastisk
Avatar af FuckDogAf d. 17. januar 2007, 23:15
[small]OMG!! Ved ikk hvad jeg skal skrive?! Det er sindssygt godt skrevet - har det på præcis samme måde! Fik tårer i øjnene da jeg læste det - bliv ved med at skrive sådan (: