Skrevet d. 22. oktober 2003, 17:40 StarStar_emptyStar_empty Thumbs-up × 1 Thumbs-down × 0 Favorite-on × 1

Set me free

Avatar af KayDP
Stop playing with my feelings
This is not fair
You know how much I care for you
That I never live a day, without thinking of you
You know you easily can destroy me if you want
And that's excactly what you're doing
Please stop
Please don't play with my feelings
Just set me free

Do you think this is funny?!
Do you find it amusing to treat me like a toy?
Cause I'm not one
I have feelings
You probably just don't know that yet
I love you so much
My heart aches
You kill a part of me every single day,
everytime you ignore me
Or worse - Treat me like dirt
You don't have any idea of what you are doing
I hate you!
You can't play with me
I won't let you
Get out! Get out of my heart!
I want you to set me free!!

Try to understand, how much I actually love you!
No one has ever left such a pain in me before
Never!
Not until you came anyway
I feel you hate me!
And you do, don't you?
You're the only one who can answer this question
And every single day that passes by, without you answering me
I die - A part of me dies!
I love you! Fuck you!!!
You probably can't relate to what I'm feeling
Well that doesn't matter
All I want to know is this;
And please answer me
Do you hate me? Love me?
Or do I mean totally nothing to you
Let me know what you feel
Tell me where I stand
Don't let me wonder
I beg you, don't do this to me
Please set me free
Avatar af KayDP d. 24. oktober 2003, 22:34
Når I har læst digtet, ville I ikke plz lægge et kommentar. Ellers er der jo ikke rigtig nogen mening i at sætte det herinde..

Om der evt. er noget der skal laves om, eller om det bare er perfekt.. Det lgiemeget. Vil bare gerne vide hvad I mener om digtet...
Avatar af -NinA!- d. 25. oktober 2003, 01:24
Jeg synes personligt, det er et flot digt.. Meget modsigende, altsigende... Keep going :)